Question

【题目】【2013湖北黄石】假如你叫李华，你打算中考结束后和同学们结伴出游，但遭到了父母的反对。请结

合此事，谈谈如何对待父母及如何解决日常生活中与他们意见不一致的问题。

要求：1. 逻辑清晰，语言通顺，观点不限，自由发挥，无需标题。

2. 文中不能以任何方式出现真实的人名、校名和县（市）区名及其它相关信息。

3. 词数：80-100。

参考词汇：中考 the High School Entrance Examination

Answer 1

【答案】

In my opinion, we should love and respect our parents because they love and care for us so much. Since we are not adults, we need to discuss things with our parents before we make decisions. But when we do so, we often find that what they think is quite different from what we think. What should we do? I think we should explain to them what we think and ask them for advice.

Take my experience for example: Last time I told my parents about my summer travel plan and they simply said "No". I was really upset at first. But later I realized that they were just worried abour my sefety. So I talked to them later and made it clear that I would be safe together with my classmates. In the end, not only did they agree to my plan but also helped me prepare for the trip.

How nice it is that our parents and we can understand each other!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文题目中给出的材料较为简略，故动笔前先要围绕主题确定写作内容，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，句式，关键单词等问题。写作中要注意举出实例来说明自己和父母之间的问题，注意表达自己的观点。结合材料可知本文主要是第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时，注意表达观点时，常见句式的应用，如：I think……，情态动词should后面动词用原形。为了是表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文思路清晰，逻辑性强。使用了适当的连词及句式，为文章增色不少.如: In my opinion, Since we are not adults, But，we often find that what they think is quite different from what we think.，Take my experience for example:， at first，But later，In the end, not only but also，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.