Question

7．在你的生命中一定有一些自己爱不释手的物品，请写一篇关于它的作文，必须包含以下要点，运用多种时态，字数不少于70词
（1）你已经拥有它多长时间
（2）你是如何获得它的
（3）你为什么珍视它
（4）它已经给你留下的回忆70词．
The most precious gift to me is this photo which was taken by my father before the park of People in my hometown．I like it very much．It was the time of my go to Beijing to study．That time I was seventeen．I like my family but I never take photo with my family before I went to Beijing and live myself in other city．I study in Beijng without my family it was lonely．
Over four years I spent my stud y life with this photo．It gave me help to go over the difficults．I have never received a gift as precious as this one!．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
The most precious gift to me is this photo which was taken by my father before the park of People in my hometown．我最珍贵的礼物是这张我父亲在我家乡的人民公园前给我照的照片．
which引导的定语从句．
 in ones hometown在某人的家乡．
句型二：
I like my family but I never take photo with my family before I went to Beijing and live myself in other city．我喜欢我的家庭，但在我去北京自己居住在其他城市之前我从没与我的家人拍照．
before引导的时间状语从句．
take photo with sb和某人照相

解答 The  most precious gift to me is this photo which was taken by my father before the park of People in my hometown．【高分句型一】（如何获得的）I like it very much．It was the time of my go to Beijing to study．That time I was seventeen．I like my family but I never take photo with my family before I went to Beijing and live myself in other city．I study in Beijng without my family it was lonely．【高分句型二】
  Over four years I spent my study life with this photo．It gave me help to go over the difficults．So I like it very much．（珍视它的原因）I have never received a gift as precious as this one!

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