Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你最好的朋友叫Tom, 他身上有许多优良的品质，请以My best friend 为题，把你的朋友向大家做个介绍。

姓名	Tom
班级	七年级一班
兴趣爱好	1. 最喜欢金鱼，喜欢观看它们游来游去。 喜欢各种户外运动，常去野营，喜欢呆在外面。
能力	1. 文章写得好、钢琴弹得好 2.思维敏捷、计划周密
品性事迹	1. 乐于助人。是社区中心的志愿者，帮助人们解决各种问题。经常参加为贫困的孩子募集钱这样的活动。 2. 勇敢(举一例)

要求：1. 条理清楚，语意连贯。

2. 书写规范，标点正确。

3. 正文80字左右。

My best friend

Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend

Tom is my best friend. He is in Class One Grade Seven. He has many hobbies and interests. He likes goldfish best and he likes watching them swim around. He also loves all kinds of outdoor. He often goes camping because he likes being outside.

Tom has different abilities. He writes god articles and plays the piano well. He learns things quickly and plans everything well.

Tom has many good qualities. He is helpful. He is a volunteer at the community center. He is ready to help people with all kinds of problems. He often takes part in activities like raising money for poor children. He is also brave. Last week, he helped his neighbor out of the fire.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己最喜欢的朋友。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。由于是朋友介绍，人称应为第三人称，时态为一般现在时态。列举的事例可用一般过去时态来表达。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。

写作亮点：本文按照写作要求，根据汉语提示，用简洁的语言，准确地表达出汉语意思，语言流畅。本文写作思路清晰，时态运用准确，主要用一般现在时态来描述。写作层次分明，分别写出了自己最好朋友的情趣爱好，能力，品质及主要事迹。