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7．目前，网络游戏吸引了大量的年轻人，尤其是中学生的关注．人们对该游戏的利于弊看法不一，请你根据提示内容用英语写一篇短文．

好处	坏处	你的观点（至少两点）
使自己放松	对视力不好，影响休息，影响学习	…
结识很多网友，有助于交流	有些网络游戏充满了血腥和暴力（blood and violence）	…
…	…

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3）词数100词左右．开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等．
Nowdays  net game is popular among young people，especially middle school students．Here are some views about net game．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Some people think  net game is good for us． 一些人认为网络游戏对我们有好处．
句中"net game is good for us"为宾语从句，句中短语"be good for…"意为"对…有好处"
高分句型二：
But we should control ourselves，don't  spend too much time playing net games．但是我们应该控制自己，不要在玩游戏上花费太多时间．
句中涉及到短语"spend+时间+（in） doing sth"，意为"在…上花费多长时间"．

解答 Nowdays  net game is popular among young people，especially middle school students．Here are some views about net game．（开篇点题）
Some people think  net game is good for us．【高分句型一】On the one hand，it can make us relaxed，on the other hand，we can make many friends online．It helps us communicate with others．However，some people disagree．They think net game is bad for our eyes．Many children have to wear glasses for this reason．What's worse，some of them don't pay attention to their studies any more．They spend much time playing net games．And some net games are full of blood and violence．It is harmful for our health．（叙述观点）
In my opinion，net game is relaxing．In a way，it can help us a lot．But we should control ourselves，don't  spend too much time playing net games．【高分句型二】（发表自己的观点）

点评 注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑．