Question

假如你班要就“如何为中考作准备”开一个主题班会，请你根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对中考准备过程中要注意的事项以及建议理由：
1. 保持良好情绪。不要焦虑和紧张，否则会没有面对困难的勇气。
2. 制定合适的目标，太低的目标使人懒散，太高的目标使人失去信心。
3. 不要熬夜，以确保上课时精力旺盛，注意力集中。
4. 多与父母、老师、同学交流沟通，以便帮忙走出困境。  
5. 谈谈你自己的一至两个观点。
注意： 1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文通顺连贯；
3. 参考词汇：目标 aim  v./ n. 信心confidence  n.
Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams? Here are some suggestions.
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With these done, I believe________________________________________________

Answer 1

Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams? Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, it’s very important for us to be in good moods. Don’t be nervous or stressed. Otherwise, we will not have the courage to face difficulties. Secondly, we should have aims. If we aim too low, we may become lazy. If we aim too high, we may lose confidence. Thirdly, don’t stay up late so that we can make ourselves energetic in class and pay attention to our study. Fourthly, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates. They can help us get out trouble. Finally, a healthy diet is very useful as well.
With these done, I believe we can be successful in the exams.

试题分析：这是篇命题作文。题目中给出了写作要点，在作文里一定要包含这些要点，并对内容加以扩充；各要点之间可使用一些承接性的句子和短语来增加文章的流畅性。文中注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用等问题。
【亮点分析】
这篇作文要点齐全，表述准确流利。文中使用了Firstly首先；Secondly第二；Thirdly第三；Fourthly第四；Finally最后，使文章结构清晰明了。文中也出现了很多常用短语，例如stay up熬夜；pay attention to注意； had better最好；communication with与……交流；等等。