Question

卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会，请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法，写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。
（1）保持健康的重要性（2）保持健康的方法（3）保持健康的结论
（4） （你的看法？）1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯
                                                                             
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            

Answer 1

Dear boys and girls：
I’m talking about how to keep health/fit. Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise， eat more junk food， and they usually do not have enough time to sleep. If we wish to keep fit， my advices are as
follow：
Firstly， we must keep taking exercises every day ， and eat lots of fruit and vegetables 。 Secondly， try to sleep for about 8 hours a night， and remember to “early to bed early to rise”。 Finally， stay away from cigarettes / smoking/ drugs毒品。 Besides（除此之外）， don’t forget to breathe （呼吸）the fresh air in the open air .Keep happy every day.
That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求介绍保持健康的重要性和方法并得出结论。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键词汇等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。写作中注意使用连接词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了合适的连词而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如Firstly ，Secondly ，Finally， Besides，等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。