Question

假如你叫王倩，5月26日那天，你和同学约好去春游。请你根据表格中所给信息，用英语写一篇日记。

活动时间	5月26日（星期日）
集合地点	学校大门口
出发时间	8:00am	到达时间	8:30am
活动地点	人民公园(the People’s Park)
交通工具	自行车
活动内容	上午 做游戏
	中午  野餐
	下午 拍照片；参观动物园
返回时间	5:00pm

参考词汇：出发set off
May 26^th, Sunday                                       Fine
It was fine.________________________________________________

Answer 1

May 26^th, Sunday                                                       Fine
It was fine. I had a spring outing with my classmates today. We met at the school gate in the morning. And we set off at 8 O’clock. We went there by bike and we arrived at the People’s Park at half past 8. There were lots of people. In the morning, I played games with my classmates. Then we had a picnic together. In the afternoon, we took some photos and visited the zoo. We saw many cute animals there. We returned home at 5 in the afternoon. We were very happy.

试题分析：这篇作为要求我们以王倩的身份写一篇日记，在日记中记录5月26号这天，和同学们一起去人民公园春游的事情。在题目中给出了我们这篇作文应主要包含的要点，如见面的时间和地点，出发和到达的时间，在公园里的活动等。另外在写的时候，我们可以再补充一些公园里的场景和自己的感受等相关的内容。因为这是一篇日记，所以这篇短文应主要使用一般过去时态，要注意句子中动词形式的变化。写作时，要按照时间的顺序记录这一天的行程，注意表达流畅，语言准确。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。在这篇短文中作者记录了自己和同学们在人民公园春游的情景。作者写作时是按照时间顺序来安排的，从早上在校门口集合出发，到在公园里做的事情等，非常有条理，有秩序。本文时态、人称正确，表述流畅，加上了一些自己感受的句子，使文章更丰富。文章中较好的句式有We went there by bike and we arrived at the People’s Park at half past 8、There were lots of people、Then we had a picnic together、We were very happy等。