分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是给朋友回信,朋友和父母发生了争吵,写信与他分析对错,并给出建议.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一、二人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.长时间打游戏是错的,父母是对的;
2.打游戏浪费时间、伤害眼睛、不利于学习;
3.理解尊重父母,与他们好好相处;
4.向父母道歉,与他们沟通;
5.不打游戏,努力学习,帮父母做家务.
常用到的重点短语:
spend+时间+on sth花时间做某事
ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
be good for 对…有益
get on with sb 与某人相处
【高分句型】
1.I think①②it's wrong for you to ③spend much time on computer games and it's right for your parents to④ask you not to do so.
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句.
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的,it是形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.
③spend+时间+on sth花时间做某事
④ask sb not to do sth 让某人不要做某事
2.①Playing computer games②not only wastes your time but also hurts your eyes.
①动名词做主语,谓语动词用单数.
②not only…but also…不仅…而且…连接两个对等成分
解答 Dear Frank,
I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents.I really worry about you.I think it's wrong for you to spend much time on computer games and it's right for your parents to ask you not to do so.(长时间打游戏是错的,父母是对的)【高分句型】Playing computer games not only wastes your time but also hurts your eyes.【高分句型】And it's not good for your study,either.(打游戏浪费时间、伤害眼睛、不利于学习)You should understand your parents and respect them.You should learn to get on well with them.(理解尊重父母,与他们好好相处;)So you must say sorry to them and communicate with them.(向父母道歉,与他们沟通)You should not play computer games.Study harder and help to do more chores at home.(不打游戏,努力学习,帮父母做家务)
Please be happy and everything will be better.
Yours,
Zhang Wei.
点评 本图表所给材料比较详细,考生要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来.动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并需有适当发挥.要注意句式的多样性,适当的使用宾语从句,转折词however,连词and等.考生可在作文之前对每部分列出大致的提纲,做到主题明确,条理清楚.可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句,为全文的展开做好铺垫.注意行文连贯,书写规范,不要出现一些诸如语法或词汇的错误.
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