Question

12．中考结束，你将度过一个漫长的假期．假设你是Li Ming，你的美国笔友Mike 来信想知道你的假期计划，请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一封回信，告诉他你的假期安排．
1．帮助父母做家务；
2．每天锻炼身体；
3．大量阅读；
4．旅游放松．
要求：
（ l ）词数：70 个左右
（ 2 ）文章必须包括所有要点，但不要逐词翻译可适当发挥
（ 3 ）文中不要出现真实的校名和姓名；
（ 4 ）信的开头已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Mike，
I'm very glad to receive your letter．Now，I'll tell you my vacation plan．
At first，I am going to help my parents to do the housework，such as doing the dishes，cleaning the floor，making the bed and so on．Then，I'll exercise every day．I think it is good for our health to play sports．At the same time，I'll read some books to open my eyes．Finally，I'll travel to relax with my parents．Maybe we'll go to the beach in Hainan．What about your vacation plan？Welcome to China!                                                                                                 Yours

                                                                                                    Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是写信给笔友告诉他你的假期计划．注意信件的格式，时态主要为一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．帮助父母做家务；
2．每天锻炼身体；
3．大量阅读；
4．旅游放松．

常用到的重点短语：
be going to 打算…
help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事
such as 例如
be good for 对…有益
at the same time同时
【高分句型】
1．I think①it②is good for our health to play sports．
①think后接的是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．it是形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正主语．
②be good for 对…有益
2．①At the same time，I'll read some books②to open my eyes．
①at the same time同时
②动词不定式表目的，做目的状语．

解答 Dear Mike，
 I'm very glad to receive your letter．Now，I'll tell you my vacation plan．At first，I am going to help my parents to do the housework，such as doing the dishes，cleaning the floor，making the bed and so on．（帮助父母做家务）Then，I'll exercise every day．I think it is good for our health to play sports．（每天锻炼身体）【高分句型】At the same time，I'll read some books to open my eyes．（大量阅读）【高分句型】Finally，I'll travel to relax with my parents．Maybe we'll go to the beach in Hainan．（旅游放松）What about your vacation plan？Welcome to China!

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．