Question

9．假如你是李锋，你的同桌黄明不喜欢英语，上课不认真听讲，不能完成作业．请你给他提一些认真学英语的建议．
要求：1．内容可适当发挥，不少于80词．
2．意思清楚，语句连贯．
Dear Huang Ming，
How are you？You're a clever boy，but you don't like English．You often don't listen to the teacher carefully and don't finish your homework．I think it's bad．English is very important to us．If we learn English badly，we'll not be able to go to college or find a good job．So we must learn it well．We should listen to the teacher carefully and finish our homework on time．We should also listento tapes and write down notes every day．
Let's work hard at English from now on．I'm sure you can learn it well．
Yours，
Li Feng．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇书信格式的作文，建议别人怎么学好英语．人称主要为第一人称和第二人称，时态以一般现在时为主．写作要点为：（1）分析李锋英语不好的原因；（2）学习英语的重要性；（3）学英语的建议．
重点词汇和短语：
listen to the teacher carefully    认真听讲
be able to do sth   有能力做某事
on time  按时
write down notes  记笔记
from now on  从现在开始
高分句型：
（1）If we learn English badly，we'll not be able to go to college or find a good job．如果我们英语学得不好，我们就不能上大学，找不到一个好工作．这里"If we learn English badly"为if引导的条件状语从句，"we'll not be able to go to college or find a good job"为主句，条件句表可能，主句多用将来时，即主将从现．or为或者，连接两个动词短语，表选择．（2）I'm sure you can learn it well．我相信你会学好英语的．"you can learn it well"为be sure 引导的宾语从句．（3）Let's work hard at English from now on．让我们从现在开始好好学习英语．这是一个let引导的祈使句，用在此处表示建议．

解答 Dear Huang Ming，
How are you？You're a clever boy，but you don't like English．You often don't listen to the teacher carefully and don't finish your homework．（英语不好的原因） I think it's bad．English is very important to us． If we learn English badly，we'll not be able to go to college or find a good job．（高分句型）So we must learn it well．（学习英语的重要性） We should listen to the teacher carefully and finish our homework on time．We should also listen to tapes and write down notes every day．（学英语的建议）
Let's work hard at English from now on． （高分句型）I'm sure you can learn it well．（高分句型）
yours
Li Feng

点评 这是一篇书信作文，要注意格式问题．要注意逻辑问题，层次分明．先分析原因，然后介绍学习英语的重要性，最后提出建议，层层递进．最后检查一遍，避免出现语法错误．