Question

假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice给你发来的e-mail的内容，给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。词数在80左右。
提示词： listen to , mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile

Dear Han Mei, I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on. I’m annoyed. What shall I do? Alice

Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.                                                  
                                                                              

Answer 1

Dear Alice,
As a teenager,I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much,because she cares about you.Maybe it’s not a good way,but it shows your mother’s love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different your mother’s,you can communicate with her,and tell her what you’re thinking about.
If your mother doesn’t take your advice,just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料是一封来信，故动笔前首先要认真阅读来信，争取在回信中对来信内容都要有所回应。结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第二人称，一般过去及现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:get along with和……相处；careabout关心；be different from与……不同；talk about谈论某事；keep silence保持沉默等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。