Question

在每个人的成长过程中，都或多或少有一些变化，现在你已经是即将毕业的初三的学生了，请以Great Changes In My Life! 为题写一篇短文。
内容包括：
生活习惯上的改变
学习状态上的转变
学习方法上的改进
要求：
词数：８０词左右。
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。   
Great Changes In My Life!
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Answer 1

Great changes in my life
As I learn more and grow up gradually, I change in many aspects. My teachers say I study harder and my parents say I am more sensible than before. As for me, I want to learn more in school and be a good boy to make my parents happy. Now, I am more focused on lessons and finish my homework actively. I know that only by working hard in study can I get a bright future. At home, I often help my mother in housework. I want to be more independent so that I can take good care of myself. I don’t want my parents worry too much about me. Besides, I like reading now. I realize books can be my friend, too. It is really interesting.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称、一般过去和现在时态进行叙述，注意主谓一致及时间状语与时态的一致问题。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文所用句式较为简单，但是由于作者叙述顺序的巧妙安排，加上一些连词和短语的使用，如：grow up长大；be focused on 集中，注意；so that以便；As for关于，至于等，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.