Question

假如你是李明，请根据以下提示，用英语给校长写一封80字左右的推荐信，推荐Simon 成为新的学生会主席。
聪明，考试经常得满分。
勤奋，一星期就完成暑假作业，学用电脑使自己更有条理。
乐于助人，不介意为班级做额外工作，人人都喜欢和他一起玩。
有很多个人才能，自信，认为只要努力，就能做任何事。
不怕在全校面前发言。
Dr Principal,
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Best wishes.
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dr Principal,
I ‘m writing to introduce my friend to you, Simon, who is going to apply for a position as the new chairman of the student union. First of all, he is very clever, and he often get full marks in the examinations. Secondly, he works hard and is able to finish summer holiday homework in one week. In summer holiday he makes full use of computer to do things in order. Thirdly, he is always willing to help others. More importantly, he never minds doing extra work for class. Therefore everyone in the class likes playing with him. And then, he has many personal talents, such as self-confidence. In his opinion, he can do anything as long as he tries his best. Finally, he is totally not afraid of making a speech before the whole school. He shows great interest in this position. If he is accepted, he will do his best. I’m sure he will be fit for the position.
　　I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes.
Li Ming

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的提纲内容完成这篇推荐作文，我们要用准确、地道的英语句子把内容表达出来。写作中要包含委婉地向校长介绍Simon适合当学生会主席的原因，重点介绍他的才能，针对所提供的五点优点进行适当发挥和表述等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，要符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文全面、详实地介绍了 Simon的优点，并包含了文中所要求的全部提示信息。其中使用的句式和短语都很准确恰当，.如：第一句使用了同位语和定语从句：I ‘m writing to introduce my friend to you, Simon, who is going to apply for a position as the new chairman of the student union.以及连词和过渡语的准确运用等，如,First of all,Secondly,Thirdly, And then,Finally, as long as以及动词短语的准确使用makes full use of shows，great interest in使文章的表达很有逻辑性,更富有条理。