Question

【题目】写作(计20分)

101. 根据中文提示，写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友。

1. Simon长得很好看，有一双小眼睛，戴着小眼镜，圆圆的脸，很可爱。

2．对朋友很慷慨，他认为应该和朋友分享一切，应该在别人需要时帮助他们。

3．他会替我保守秘密，是一个真正的朋友。

4．他喜欢和孩子在一起，长大以后想在他理想的学校当一名老师。

注意：1.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；

2.词数80左右；

3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名 。

My good friend

Answer 1

【答案】

My good friend

Simon is my best friend. He is a pretty beautiful girl. He has a pair of small eyes， round face and he often wears small glasses. so he looks very cute.

He is very generous to friends. He thinks friends should share everything with each other. And he thinks friends should help others when they are in need. He will keep the secret for me. I think he is a true friend.

He likes children and often plays with them together. So he wants to be a teacher when he grows up.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。要求介绍自己的朋友，主要介绍三个方面，外貌特征，对待朋友的态度，梦想。主要用一般现在时，主语是第三人称单数注意主谓一致。

亮点说明：这篇短文要点全面，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。用了一些短语和句式，如：She has a pair of small eyes， round face and she often wears small glasses. so she looks very cute. She is very generous to friends. She likes children and often plays with them together.用了一些连词，如：so,that；when等增加文章的亮点。