Question

书面表达 （本大题共10分）

假如你叫Billy，是无锡市某初级中学的一名九年级学生，学校将组织由学生推选“十佳教师”的评选活动。你准备写一封推荐信给校长Mr Smith，推荐你的英语老师Mrs Lin当选，请你根据要点提示写一封电子邮件给Mr Smith。

内容要点如下：

四十几岁，教英语已有十几年；

耐心，为我们重复语法规则；

严格，要求我们尽可能经常复习所学内容；

4. 善良并充满爱心，……

5. 令我们惊讶的是……

注意：

1. 推荐信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 第4、5要点的内容须用2～3句话作适当发挥；

3. 词数80个左右，推荐信的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to recommend our English teacher Mrs Lin as one of the top ten teachers.

I think Mrs Lin is the most suitable person to be the top teacher. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Billy

Answer 1

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to recommend our English teacher Mrs Lin as one of the top ten teachers. She’s in her forties and has taught English for over ten years. She’s patient enough to repeat grammar rules for us. She is strict with us. She requires us to go over what we’ve learnt as often as possible. She’s also kind and has a heart full of love. She’s willing to offer help to the students in trouble. To our surprise, she donates her money to three poor students in a village in the west of China every year.

I think Mrs Lin is the most suitable person to be the top teacher. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Billy

【解析】

试题分析：这篇文章叫小作者写一封推荐信给校长Mr Smith，推荐你的英语老师Mrs Lin当选。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的文章的内容。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如She’s patient enough to repeat grammar rules for us. She is strict with us. She requires us to go over what we’ve learnt as often as possible. She’s also kind and has a heart full of love. She’s willing to offer help to the students in trouble. To our surprise, she donates her money to three poor students in a village in the west of China every year.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文。