Question

13．假如你校英语报七月份将开展"校园之星"（Star of the Campus）评选活动，请你根据图
中的信息，向校英语报写一篇短文，介绍你心目中"校园之星"康康的情况．

提示词：help…with 　 spare time  get along with do housework
要求：1．文章内容符合题意，可参考所给提示词；
      2．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
      3．词数100左右（文章首段已给出，不计人总词数）．
Our school will select（挑选）"Star of the Campus（校园）"in July．I think Kangkang is the most suitable one．
At school，KangKang studies very hard at his lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our class．He also loves sports．He often plays football at weekends with his friends．What's more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after class．
At home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare time．Besides，KangKang gets along well with his neighbors．This is why KangKang is so popular．
In short，KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need．He sets a good example for us．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是介绍你心目中"校园之星"康康的情况．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
描述图画；在学校：康康学习努力，成绩好，爱足球，关心同学帮助同学
在家：帮助妈妈做家务，邻里关系好

常用到的重点短语：
study hard 努力学习
what's more 再者
care for 照顾
help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
get along well with sb 与某人相处的好
【高分句型】
1．①What's more，he②cares for other students，so he always③helps them with their lessons after class．
①what's more 再者
②care for 照顾
③help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
2．This is why KangKang is so popular．
why引导的从句和is构成系表结构．
3．①In short，KangKang is an excellent student and he②is always ready to help others③in need．
①in short 简言之，做插入语．
②be ready to do sth 乐意做某事
③in need 在危急中，做后置定语，修饰others．

解答 Our school will select（挑选）"Star of the Campus（校园）"in July．I think Kangkang is the most suitable one．
At school，KangKang studies very hard at his lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our class．He also loves sports．He often plays football at weekends with his friends．What's more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after class．【高分句型】（在学校的表现）
At home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare time．Besides，KangKang gets along well with his neighbors．This is why KangKang is so popular．【高分句型】（在家的表现）
In short，KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need．【高分句型】He sets a good example for us．

点评 这是一篇看图作文．看图作文要注意一下几点（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节．  （2）结合提示词，明确考查意图．所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容，也是组成句子的必用材料．有时还会给出起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了． （3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯． （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用．（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等．