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3．2010年4月，青海玉树发生了地震（earthquake），家园、学校受到了损坏．一名 灾区的学生（Zhuoma）下周将来你们班．她将在你们班学习一年．请根据表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你将如何帮助她，并适当写出自己的想法．

卓玛（Zhuoma）	On weekdays	On weekends
年龄：13岁 家乡：青海玉树	1．带她参观校园 2．送她学习用品 3．在学习上帮助她 4…	1．请她来家里 2．一起吃饭 3…

注意字数要控制在80〜100词左右．
2．不要出现你的姓名和学校信息．
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Zhuoma will come to our class next week．She's fromYushu，Qinghai．In her hometown，she couldn't go to school because of the earthquake．She'll study with us for a year．As her new classmate，I'll try my best to help her．When she comes，I'll introduce my friends to her and show her around our school．On weekdays，I'm going to give her some school things．I'm good at English，so I can help her with her English．I'll help her join our English club．
Maybe she is lonely on weekends，I can invite her to my home．We'll have dinner together．Then，we can play games or watch TV．
I'll do my best to make her happy and feel at home．In my opinion，all Chinese come from a family．We should help each other．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈你将如何帮助来自灾区的学生，并适当写出自己的想法．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1卓玛（Zhuoma）：年龄：13岁 家乡：青海玉树
2上学期间：1）．带她参观校园2）．送她学习用品3）．在学习上帮助她 4）…
3周末：1）请她来家里2）一起吃饭 3）…
4自己的想法
常用到的重点短语：
be from 来自
because of 由于
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
be good at 擅长
help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
make sb+adj 让某人怎么样的
【高分句型】
1．In her hometown，she couldn't go to school because of the earthquake．
because of 由于，of是介词，后加名词代词或动名词．
2．①When she comes，I'll introduce my friends to her and②show her around our school．
①when所引导的时间状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．
②show sb around …带某人参观

解答 Zhuoma will come to our class next week．Zhuoma，a 13-year-old girl，is from Yushu，Qinghai．（卓玛：年龄：13岁 家乡：青海玉树）In her hometown，she couldn't go to school because of the earthquake．【高分句型】She'll study with us for a year．As her new classmate，I'll try my best to help her．When she comes，I'll introduce my friends to her and show her around our school．【高分句型】（带她参观校园）On weekdays，I'm going to give her some school things．（送她学习用品）I'm good at English，so I can help her with her English．（在学习上帮助她）I'll help her join our English club．（参加俱乐部）
Maybe she is lonely on weekends，I can invite her to my home．（请她来家里）We'll have dinner together．（一起吃饭）Then，we can play games or watch TV．（一起玩游戏看电视）
I'll do my best to make her happy and feel at home．In my opinion，all Chinese come from a family．We should help each other．（自己的想法）

点评 提纲图表式作文属于控制性写作的范畴．学生在写作时应仔细分析图表，引证典型数据并按提纲要求进行取材与构思．本文中写作时要特别注意两类人的观点的描述．要在比较中得出自己的结论和观点．