Question

【题目】以My hometown为题写一篇80词左右的文章，包含下列要点，语句通顺。

1.	和父母住在扬州市中心的一栋大楼中，一共14层，你们住在第9层；
2.	很喜欢住在这儿，树多、花草美，这儿的邻居们也很善良友好；
3.	志愿者们经常周末在社区中心会面，帮助人们解决各种麻烦；(举例) …… …… ……
4.	能住在这样的社区我们真的都很幸运

Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown

Yangzhou is my hometown. It is a beautiful city. I live in a tall building in the center of the city with my parents. There are 14 floors in this building. We live on the ninth floor. I like living here, there are many trees around here. The flowers and grass are very beautiful, and the neighbors are also very kind and friendly.

Volunteers often meet at the community center on weekends to help people solve all kinds of problems, like mending their televisions or computers, telling stories for old people and so on. To live in such a good community, we are really very lucky.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，主要介绍作者的家乡---扬州，介绍作者家乡的美，家乡的社区，和家乡邻居的友好与善良，在写作时应注意语言的准确性和连贯性。不要逐字的去翻译。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，介绍了作者家乡的美丽，短文用了很多精彩的句型，如The flowers and grass are very beautiful, and the neighbors are also very kind and friendly.

给文章增色不少。最后一句写出了自己对家乡由衷的热爱。To live in such a good community, we are really very lucky.