Question

假设你是谢凯，是一名中学生。你们学校附近有一条河，去年河边开办一家工厂

河水受到污染。请你向厂长写一封80 词左右的信，信中包含以下内容：

 1)建厂前河流的概况； 2) 工厂倾倒废水造成的后果； 3). 呼吁采取措施,保护环境.

参考词汇: river, clean water, fish, swimming, flowers and grass, open the factory, pour waste water, dirty, smell terrible, fish die, pollute, stop, clean up, do something, protect environment

Dear sir,

   I’m Xie Kai,

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear sir,

   I’m Xie Kai,.Our middle school is near the river.Several years ago, there were a lot of fish swimming in the clean water and we could see flowers and grass on both sides of it. But now things have changed. The water becomes dirty, it smells terrible and all fish die .I find waste water was poured into the river from the factory everyday since it was built here.I think we should do something to stop polluting the river,such as cleaning up the river.Protecting pollution is our duty .

                                                                        Yours sincerely

                                                                           Xie Kai 

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。作者主要写在工厂建成前后河的变化，全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 a lot of，swimming in the clean water ，on both sides of it，smells terrible，poured into ，stop polluting，such as，cleaning up等短语；时间状语从句 since it was built here；宾语从句waste water was poured into the river from the factory everyday， we should do something to stop polluting the river；并列句The water becomes dirty, it smells terrible and all fish die；被动语态如was poured， was built；现在分词作定语如 swimming；动名词作主语如Protecting pollution 。 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文