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2．迈克（Mike）过去英语成绩不太好，课堂上听不懂老师讲的、不会发音、不会语法、爱睡觉、不交作业…他甚至想放弃英语．但在老师和同学的帮助下，他下决心努力学习．现在他变化了很多，并且成了班上英语成绩优秀的学生．请根据下表和提示词，以 Never give up 为题写一篇70-90词的短文．号召大家不要轻言放弃，要变问题为挑战，勇敢面对．
提示词：used to；  hand in；  now；  with the help of；  decide；  work hard at；

in the past	How	now
poor in English can't… don't…	learn by…	top student

要求：1．语言流畅，规范；
2．包含提示内容，并作适当发挥；
3.80 词左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
He thought it was too difficult to hand in the homework．
句中"it was too difficult to hand in the homework"为宾语从句，使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"结构．这句话意为：他认为它太难了，不能送交作业．
高分句型二：
If he has problem，he will ask the teacher for help．
句中"If he has problem"为条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则．句中短语有"ask sb　for　help　向某人寻求帮助"．这句话意为：如果他有问题，他会向老师寻求帮助．

解答 Never give up 
Mike used to be poor in English．He can't understood what the teacher said．He didn't know not only the pronunciation but also the grammer．He usually slept in English class．He thought it was too difficult to hand in the homework．【高分句型一】He even wanted to give up．（过去的情况）
With the help of his teacher and classmates，he decided to study hard at English．He listens to the teacher carefully．After class，he does his homework．He reads English every morning．If he has problem，he will ask the teacher for help．【高分句型二】Now，he has become one of the top students．（现在的情况）
It shows that we should never give up，no matter what difficulty we meet．We should change the problems into challenges and face them bravely．（我的感想）

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