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13.在你的成长过程中,父亲会给你的一生带来很大的影响,请根据表格中的提示向读者介绍你的父亲,具体要求如下:
1.要点齐全,而且有适当拓展,但不得逐字翻译;
2.条理清晰,语意连贯,字迹工整.
3.词数90 左右.
My Father
年龄外貌四十多岁;中等身材
兴趣爱好兴趣广泛,尤喜阅读;最爱蓝色,因为…
性格特点精力充沛,富有条理; 充满爱心,乐于助人
给我帮助悉心照料;倾听心声;
我的认识良师益友,…
My father has influenced me a lot since I was born.       .

分析 高分句型一
 Blue is his favorite color because it can bring him peace and make him calm down when he feels worried蓝色是他最喜欢的颜色,因为它能给他带来平静,使他感到沮丧时平静下来.这是because引导的原因状语从句,因为….
高分句型二
I think he is not only my good teacher but also my good friend我认为他不仅是我的好老师,也是我的好朋友,这是一个宾语从句,I think 是主句,后面的是宾语从句,not only …but also不仅…而且.

解答 My father has influenced me a lot since I was born.He is neither too tall nor too short and has a lot of interests,especially reading.Blue is his favorite color because it can bring him peace and make him calm down when he feels worried【高分句型一,注意状语从句的使用】.He is energetic and organized.He also has a heart full of love.He often helps others in need.【要点一,年龄外貌,兴趣爱好和性格特点】.
He takes good care of me and can listen to my worries and happiness patiently.【要点二,给我帮助】
I think he is not only my good teacher but also my good friend.【高分句型二,注意宾语从句的使用】I love him very much.【要点三,我的认识】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.

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