Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你校英文报下一期专栏的话题是“讲述一件令人难忘的事情”。请根据下面提供的开头部分，发挥你的想象力就此话题续写该短文，然后向该专栏投稿。

要求：1.文中使用情态动词表示推测的句子至少两句；2.文中应体现你由恐惧到惊喜的情感变化过程。3.词数90左右。开头部分已给出，但不计入总词数。

I had a frightening and exciting experience last Thursday night. After finishing my homework, I was going to bed. Just then, I heard the sound of footsteps outside my door. I wondered who it could be.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】I had a frightening and exciting experience last Thursday night. After finishing my homework, I was going to bed. Just then, I heard the sound of footsteps outside my door. I wondered who it could be.It couldn't be my father or my mother, because they had gone to their friend's party. They said they would come back home late. It couldn't be a thief, either. A thief would feel afraid and be very quiet. Perhaps it could be my neighbor. He may have come back home from work. He always works late in the office. I said to myself, “Be brave! There's nothing to be worried about.” Then I opened the door and all my friends were there saying “Happy birthday”. I thought they'd forgotten! How excited I was!

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下令你难忘的事情。所提供的材料中列举了开头部分：I had a frightening and exciting experience last Thursday night. After finishing my homework, I was going to bed. Just then, I heard the sound of footsteps outside my door. I wondered who it could be.，主要从你由恐惧到惊喜的情感变化过程去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

I wondered who it could be. 我想知道它是谁。这是一个宾语从句，I wondered 是主句，后面的是宾语从句。

【高分句型二】

It couldn't be my father or my mother, because they had gone to their friend's party. 不可能是我爸爸或妈妈，因为他们去参加朋友的聚会了。这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…。