Question

根据中文和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、语言表达准确、符合逻辑、80左右词的短文，所给英文提示词语仅供选用，请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。

生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法……

现在，某英文报纸就分享（Sharing）话题征文，请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：share…with…;experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident

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Answer 1

I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas ,problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文题材紧扣学生学习生活，学生有自我发挥的空间。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘话题内涵，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，掌握一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。