Question

3．假如你是Li Hua，请给你英国的笔友Brian写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：

四年前	你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独
四年中	Brian多次给你写信，他在信中： 鼓励你多交朋友；告诉你学好英语的方法；和你分享快乐… 你变得…
近年来泰安发生了很大变化，你邀请他来泰安游玩．

要求：1．不少于80词；=2．信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；=3．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥；4．参考词汇：share happiness分享快乐．
Dear Brian，
How time flies!We have been friends for four years．I'm writing to thank you for your great help!
Four years ago，       ．
Hope to see you soon!
Yours，
Zhang Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
During these four years，you wrote to me many times and always encouraged me to make friends as many as possible．
句中短语有："encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事"、"make friends 交朋友"、"as…as possible  尽可能…"．这句话意为：在这四年里，你给我写了很多次信，而且总是鼓励我尽可能多的交朋友．
高分句型二：
These years，great changes have taken place in Taian and I hope you can come to Taian to experience the new changes．
句中"you can come to Taian to experience the new changes"为宾语从句．"take place"意为"发生"．这句话意为：这些年，泰安发生了很大变化，我希望你能来泰安体验这些新变化．

解答 Dear Brian，
  How time flies!We have been friends for four years．I'm writing to thank you for your great help!（点明主旨）
  Four years ago，when I came to the new class，everything was strange to me．I had no friends and felt very lonely．It was you who helped me a lot．
  During these four years，you wrote to me many times and always encouraged me to make friends as many as possible．【高分句型一】When I had trouble with my English，you told me many good ways to improve it．Besides，you were always sharing happiness with me，which made my life more colorful．Thanks to your help，I have become more confident and positive．I really appreciate your help．（回忆过去的经历）
  These years，great changes have taken place in Taian and I hope you can come to Taian to experience the new changes．【高分句型二】（邀请朋友）
  Hope to see you soon!
Yours，
Zhang Ming

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．