Question

【题目】假如你叫张蒙,班主任李老师想了解班级同学的状况,以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求,给班主任李老师写封e-mail,说明自己的情况,并请她给你提一些建议。内容要求:

1.学习任务重,睡眠不足,缺少体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。

2.在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。

From:zhangmeng@163.com To:chlw524@sina.com Subject: problems Date: June 26

Dear Ms Li,

I'm very glad to write to you_______________________________________________________________

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Best wishes.

Zhang Meng

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ms Li,

I'm very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days. Every day I have a lot of homework to do at school. I don't enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk, or play together. When I get back home from school, I'm not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favourite music. I feel worried about them. I don't know what I should do. Could you please give me some suggestions?

Best wishes.

【解析】本文属于材料作文，给班主任李老师写信说明自己的情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如trouble, have a lot of homework to do, enough time, hardly, allow to do, favorite以及worried。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。