Question

7．为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议．假如你是王波，请用英语向校长写一篇建议信．

内容包括：	Suggestions for a Better School Life
	学校	老师
	﹡常开放图书馆 ﹡组织更多课后活动 ﹡给予我们更多的运动时间 ﹡少组织考试 ﹡﹍﹍	﹡让课堂更有趣 ﹡课堂上说得更简单明了一些 ﹡准时下课 ﹡布置少一点作业 ﹡﹍﹍

作文要求：
1 文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥．语句连贯，80词左右．
2 不能在作文中出现真实的校名和姓名．作文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear headmaster，
    I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school  willopen the library more often．Second，I thinkour school can organize more after-class activities． Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting． And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，wewill be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                           Yours 
                                                             sincerely，
                                                                  Wang B．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是提出一些为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长的建议，给校长写一封信，注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1学校（1）常开放图书馆（2）组织更多的课后活动；（3）给予我们更多的运动时间（4）少组织考试
2老师：（1）让课堂更有趣；（2）课堂上说得更简单明了一些；（3）准时下课（4）布置少一点作业
常用到的重点短语：
make+sth+adj让某物怎样
be interested in 感兴趣
what's more 再者
on time 准时
【高分句型】
1．And I suggest①our school should organize fewer exams②as well．
①suggest后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②as well 也，放句末．
2．And①if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will②be more interested in studying and have more time③to practice．
①if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．
②be interested in 感兴趣
③动词不定式做目的状语．
3．①What's more，I hope ②they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
①what's more 再者
②hope后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．on time 准时

解答 Dear Headmaster，
     I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will open the library more often．（常开放图书馆）Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．（组织更多的课后活动） Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．（更多的时间运动）And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（少组织考试）【高分句型】
As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．（让课堂更有趣） And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．【高分句型】（课堂上说得更简单明了一些）What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．【高分句型】（准时下课；布置少一点作业）
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                             
Yours sincerely，
 Wang Bo

点评 这是一篇应用文，注意信件的格式，主要是提出建议，注意表达的委婉性，考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少