Question

9．根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60----80词的短文，所给提示词语供选用．
地球上有近二分之一的人口缺乏足够的饮用水．发现并制止水的浪费是每个人的责任．请你简述身边是否有浪费水的现象，是如何浪费的并对此谈谈你的看法．提示词语：
one half of the world's population，water wasting，shower，run，speed，
tap （水龙头）
Save  Water
Nowadays nearly one half of the world's population doesn't have enough water．But water wasting can be found in many ways in our daily life．For example，when we have showers，we often let it run at full speed．After we wash something at home，we often throw the water away．When something is wrong with a tap，no one repair it in time．Water will come out of it．What a pity!
I think we'll try and change our habits to save every drop of water for future．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
But water wasting can be found in many ways in our daily life．但是在我们日常生活的许多方面浪费水的现象随处可见．
含有情态动词的被动语态，其结构为情态动词+be+过去分词
高分句型二：
①For example，②when we have shower，we often let it run at full speed例如当我们洗淋浴时，我们经常把水开到最大．
①for example 例如
②when引导时间状语从句

解答 Nowadays nearly one half of the world's population doesn't have enough water．【地球上有近二分之一的人口缺乏足够的饮用水】But water wasting can be found in many ways in our daily life．【高分句型一】For example，when we have showers，we often let it run at full speed．【高分句型二】After we wash something at home，we often throw the water away．When something is wrong with a tap，no one repair it in time．Water will come out of it．What a pity!【身边浪费水的现象】
     I think we'll tryand change our habits to save every drop of water for future【表达自己的看法】

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