Question

Writing 6( 2015 山西)

某校开展“我 是课堂小主人” 建 议征集活动，各班 就此展开讨论，同 学们纷纷发言：“我希望能有足够的自主学习时间……”“我喜欢的课堂是每人 都有一台笔记本电脑，方便上网查询……”“课上我们能自由地 讨论，充分展示我们的学习成果……”等。请你结合同学们讨论 的结果，给校长以电子邮件的形式写一封信，建议什么样的课堂更为同学们喜爱，也更有利于同学们未来的发展。内容须包括以下要点：

. What is your favorite class like?

. Please tell us an unforgettable experience youVe had in your class.

. Please give at least two suggestions.

要求：1. 同数80词左右，提示词仅供参考；

2. 邮件的格式已给出，开头、结尾不计入总词数；

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

Dear Mr. Li，

     

                          Best wishes, 

                         Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Writing 6

[写作提示]

1. 本文属于记叙与议论相结合的文章，主要时态为一般过去时和 一般现在时。

2. 内容要点：

(1) 你最喜欢的课堂是什么样的；

(2) 你曾经有过的课堂上的一次难忘的经历；

(3) 你给校长的关于课堂形式的至少两条建议。

[参考范文]

Dear Mr.Li,

    My favorite class is an open and free class where I can learn by myself and discuss in groups,which is good for my development,I think.

    I still remember an unforgettable experience in my maths class. Several days ago I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class,but it was too hard for me to work them out.So I had to ask my classmates for help. After a considerable discussion,we solved the problems in our group. How excited I was!

    Having such a great experience,I want to give two suggestions.Firstly,please don't teach us too much in class. We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class. Secondly,please provide us with some laptops if possible,so we can surf the Internet easily.No doubt,we need an open and free class,you see.

    That's all.Thank you.

                        Best wishes,

                         Zhang Hua