Question

7．临近中考，你有很多烦心事．最让你心烦的是你的父母．他们特别关注你的学习，每次测验的结果你都要报告给他们．如果考得好，他们就会开心和满意．但如果没有，他们就会担心．尤其是你的妈妈．她已经为你的未来制定好了计划．你很讨厌这一点，但又不想让她失望，你不知道怎么办才好．
Mr Help 是你们学校特邀的青少年的知心朋友．请你用 little upset的署名给他发一封电子邮件，把你的烦恼告诉他，或许他能帮到你．

写作要求：
1、邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
2、可以适度发挥，使行文连贯．
3、80-100词左右的英语短文．
注意：文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名．
参考词汇：中考the Senior School Entrance Examination   烦心事 upset
My Mr Help，
I'm a middle school student．Recently，one thingdisturbed me all the time．As you know that，the Senior School Entrance Examination is coming closerand my parents paid much attention to my study．After the end of a test，I had to tell them how was that going，if it was good，they was happy．However，if it was bad，they worried about my study．Moreover，I hate that my mom had make a plan for mu future life．All these upsets make me unhappy and I don't know what to do．I hope that you can give me a hand．Wish to receive your reply．
Yours
Little upset．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：the Senior School Entrance Examination is coming closer中考越来越近了，用比较级形式表示越来越近；
高分句型二：I hate that my mom had make a plan for mu future life我讨厌妈妈已经为我安排好了今后的生活，此处用that引导宾语从句，表示讨厌什么；
高分句型三：．I hope that you can give me a hand我希望你能给我提供帮助，此处用that引导宾语从句，同时运用词组give sb a hand帮忙．

解答 My Mr Help，
I'm a middle school student．Recently，one thing disturbed me all the time．As you know that，the Senior School Entrance Examination is coming closer（高分句型一） and my parents paid much attention to my study（说明原因一）．After the end of a test，I had to tell them how was that going，if it was good，they was happy．However，if it was bad，they worried about my study．Moreover，I hate that my mom had make a plan for mu future life（高分句型二，说明原因二）．All these upsets make me unhappy and I don't know what to do（说明为什么要寻求帮助）．I hope that you can give me a hand（高分句型三，请求帮忙）．Wish to receive your reply．Yours
Little upset．

点评 对于作文题，首先应该充分了解题目的含义及要求．若给定的条件不足，可进行适当发挥；同时，平时还应该多注意关键句型、固定短语及高分句型的理解及记忆，做题时才能得心应手．