Question

最近的一项调查研究表明：大约有20% 的学生有不吃早餐的习惯。 请根据下列表格的内容提示写一篇大约80字左右的英语短文，文章的开头已经给出。

原因	1. 晚上学习学到太晚，想多睡一会而不吃早餐；
2. 家长太忙无法照顾孩子，直接给钱让孩子自己解决早餐；
3. 一些男生拿钱去玩游戏，一些女生为了身材苗条而不吃早餐；
后果	1. 上课无精打采，成绩下降；
2. 身体越来越差；
你的建议	？（至少写出一条建议并给出理由）

 

From a recent survey, we know that about twenty percent students have no habit of having breakfast. ____________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

From a recent survey, we know that about twenty percent have no habit of having breakfast. Some of the students stay up late to study. In the morning, they prefer to sleep a little more rather than spend the time eating breakfast. Some parents are too busy to take care of their children, They have no time to cook breakfast for them. So they just give them some money to buy something to eat. But some boys spend the money playing games while some of the girls give up eating breakfast to keep slim. As a result, they can’t do well at school without breakfast. Students can’t concentrate in class because they have no breakfast. They get worse results. On the other hand, it’s bad for their health.

In my opinion, student should eat breakfast so that they can keep fit and have enough energy to have classes. If they are busy with their, parents should remind them of it. And parents should buy some food at home instead of giving them money so that they can take some to school.   

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一篇有关早餐问题的议论文，本题所给材料较为详细,动笔前先根据材料确定时态，句式，词汇等主要内容。根据内容可知本文人称时态问题较为复杂,注意人称与谓语动词的一致关系,时态与时间状语的搭配。写作中注意使用连接词，注意表达的多样化，做到语意连贯符合逻辑。内容应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。