Question

【题目】写作

你有一个朋友，请你根据以下信息向大家介绍一下他的情况，所有要点都要写上，也可适当发挥。不少于40字。

First name :Jack	School: PEP Middle School
Last name: Brown	Class: Class 1, Grade 7
Age:13	Family member(成员)：father, mother and sister
Telephone number:8797236	Hobby（爱好）: read books and play basketball

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a friend named Jack Brown.Jack is his first name and his last name is Brown.He is 13 years old.He studies in PEP Middle School.He is in Class 1, Grade 7.His father is a teacher.His students all like him. His mother is a doctor.She likes her work.He has a sister.She is also a student.They are in the same school.He likes reading books and playing basketball in his free time.His telephone number is 8797236.

【解析】

试题分析：短文是介绍自己的朋友的情况，所以句子应该用第一人称单数，用一般现在时，不要遗漏信息，可以适当增加一些信息，要注意句子的语法正确，要句子上下文的衔接。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：He is in Class 1, Grade 7.They are in the same school.He likes reading books and playing basketball in his free time.提醒学生平时注意积累一些短语和句式，多背一些范文。短文用了一些连词and等，增加了文章的亮点。