Question

10．每个人都有一个家．家，无论大小，只要温馨就好．你的家漂亮吗？你爱你的家吗？请以My Home 为题写一篇60词左右的小短文．请尽量用There be 句型和表方位的介词短语（如under，near，in front of，behind，in the center of…）．
要求：内容贴切，句意通顺，单词拼写正确，书写工整．
My Home
                                                  

Answer 1

分析 本文是让写自己的家，要求用there be句型和一些介词短语来写，所以我们确定时态应该用一般现在时．要注意主语的变化，要符合主谓一致的语法，正确使用方位介词表示某物的位置关系．
①Welcome to my home．欢迎来到我家．welcome to 欢迎到某地方来．
②There's a bed and a desk in my bedroom．我的卧室里有一张床和一张书桌．本题考查了there be结构，表示某处有某物，be动词和后面紧跟的名词保持一致．

解答 My  Home
　Welcome to my home（高分句型）．（发出邀请）My home is very nice and big（家的总体情况）．The kitchen is near the living room．The bathrooom is in front of the kitchen．My study is big and clean．A computer and a lot of  books are on the desk．My bedroom is next to my study．There's a bed and a desk in my bedroom．There's a lamp on the desk．There is a ball under the desk．（具体介绍屋内东西的位置）I like my home．（感受）

点评 短文使用了一些表示方位的介词，用了there be句型，如There's a bed and a desk in my bedroom；
A computer and a lot of  books are on the desk．My bedroom is next to my study．等，还用了连词and等．