Question

Writing 8(2013江苏南京白下区)

    目前，有些中学生在“崇尚节俭，文明做人”方面做得不够 好，在校园里有时会看到以下图片中的情形。请你选择以下现 象中的几种或全部进行描述,并就中学生如何“杜绝浪费，文明 做人”提出至少两点建议。

要求：l.文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。

2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。

3. 词数80左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计人总词数。

    Some middle school students aren’t doing enough in “ advocating thrift and being civilized ”. 

Answer 1

Writing 8

[写作提示]

1. 审题:本文属于议论文。主体时态为一般现在时。

2. 确定要点：

(1) 描述图片中的现象；

(2) 提出建议。

[参考范文]

    Some middle school students aren’t doing enough in “ advocating thrift and being civilizedM.

    We’re sorry to see so much waste in some schools!Some students have got into bad habits.For example,some often leave the taps on after washing their hands,and others sometimes leave lights on when they leave the classrooms. At the dining hall,a lot of food can be seen left on the table after the meals.What's worse,in the classroom,we often find that a lot of waste paper isn’t dropped in the right place. It makes others feel uncomfortable,especially in summer. In addition,some students like to write words or draw pictures on the wall or on the desk.

    As middle school students,we should save water and electricity.Don’t waste food. It's very necessary for us to keep the environment around us clean and tidy .Let's do them from now on!