Question

8．根据中文提示和英文书信内容，请代王涛给David写一封回信，回答信中的问题，介绍合肥良好的公交服务，并谈谈你的感受．词数在80-100字．已给的开头和结尾不计人总词数：

Hi!Wang Tao，     My grandpa is going to Hefei this summer vacation because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself．He says the bus service in Hefei is very good．and the people are very friendly．Is that right？Can you tell me something more about it？     I'm looking forward to learning from you soon．                                                                                 Yours，                                                                                 David

Hi!David，    I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Hefei．____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     If you have more questions，please ask me．                                                                               Yours，                                                                              Wang Tao

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I like taking a bus to school because it's comfortable and safe．我喜欢坐公共汽车去学校，因为它既舒适又安全．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．
高分句型二
If you have more questions，please ask me．如果你有更多的问题，请问我．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是祈使句，从句用的是一般现在时．

解答 Hi!David，
I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Hefei．Your grandpa is right．Now great changes have taken place in Hefei and the bus service is really very good．【开头点明主题】There are a lot of bus lines all over Hefei and buses can take you anywhere．People don't need to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap．Besides，three subway lines are being built．In the coming future，the transport in Hefei will become better．【正文部分详细介绍合肥的交通】
I like taking a bus to school because it's comfortable and safe【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】．Also it's good for our environment．So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Hefei．【结尾部分表明自己的观点】
If you have more questions，please ask me．【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】
Yours，
Wang Tao

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．