Question

【题目】书面表达

请你以David的身份给May写一封信, 介绍你自己和你家人的情况。你可以谈谈他们的爱好和他们所喜欢的食物。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

提示词: family, play soccer, fish, chicken, vegetables

要求: 50词左右。

Dear May,

I'm David. I'm from England. I want to tell you about my family.

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Yours,

David

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear May,

I'm David. I'm from England. I want to tell you about my family. Four people are in my family. They're my mother, my father, my sister and I. My father likes playing soccer. He likes eating fish very much. My mother likes watching TV. Chicken is her favorite food. My sister Julia and I are in the same school. We like playing computer games and ping-pong. We don't like eating vegetables. We like eating hamburgers.

Yours,

David

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，以David的身份给May写一封信, 介绍你自己和你家人的情况。你可以谈谈他们的爱好和他们所喜欢的食物。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’m...，I want to...，My father likes...，My sister Julia and I are...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意写作中使用题目中所提示的词。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的名字、国籍、写信目的是介绍关于家人的情况，接下来家里成员以及他们的爱好，最后介绍我们喜欢的运动、喜欢的食物。此处be from, want to do sth, tell sb about sth, like doing sth, play the computer games等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。