Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你去年夏天和你的家人一起去了海边度假，请以。My Vacation。为题，讲述一下 你的旅游经历。 写作要点：1.你和家人在海滩的活动。

2.你对这次度假的感受。

写作要求：条理清晰，意思连贯，词句通顺。词数80个左右。

My Vacation

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Answer 1

【答案】

My vacation

Last summer I went to the beach with my family.Our vacation was pretty good.We went there by bus and the bus trip was relaxing. The beach was very beautiful and clean. I played with the sand. It was sunny, cool and wet. The people there were friendly and the food was delicious. I ate lots of sea food. We enjoyed the vacation very much and we hope to go there again.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍去年暑假去海边度假的情况，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如The people there were friendly and the food was delicious. I ate lots of sea food. We enjoyed the vacation very much and we hope to go there again.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。