Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Zhang Lin，你的笔友Li Hua来信询问你学英语的方法。请你给他写一封回信，并给他提一些学好英语的建议(至少两条建议)。回信的开头已给出，不计入总字数。

Dear Li Hua,

Thanks for your letter. You asked me _______________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Zhang Lin

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

Thanks for your letter. You asked me how to learn English well and here are some of my suggestions. First of all, practice English every day. There are various aspects of English learning, including speaking, reading, listening and writing. It doesn’t necessarily mean that every aspect should be paid attention to each day.You can choose one or more as long as you have time and energy. Next, build a solid vocabulary base. Little can be done to improve your English without enough vocabulary. What’s more, watch English movies. It’s hard to keep learning interest by only focusing on textbooks. Movies can add color to your learning and provide real environment for practice as well. I hope what I have suggested above will be of great help to you.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Lin

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。要求以书信的方式总结学习英语的方法和建议，实质就是一篇“论如何学英语”的议论文，提出大于等于两个以上建议即可，最后勿忘加上书信结尾的客套话。

写作亮点：不定式与疑问副词how搭配作为ask的宾语，用法等于how you could learn English well的宾语从句；that引导的宾语从句中用pay attention to的被动语态，to不可省略；as long as引导的条件状语从句；little与without两个词在句中起到“双重否定”作用，强调了词汇基础的重要；focus on与上文的pay attention to是同义词组，在写作中要多使用同义替换，体现词汇多样性；what引导从句起到两个作用--大宾从小主从；be of great help代替helpful，用名词词组更显正式。