Question

12．假如你们学校展开"大量农民进城"是好还是坏的大讨论，请你根据下面表格中的内容提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，开头已给出（不计入总词数），可以适当发挥．

乐观者的观点	会使农民更富有；城市更美好；国家更富强
担心者的观点	留守儿童增多，孩子缺少父母关爱，对他们的教育出现问题
你自己的观点	…

参考词汇：left-behind children 留守儿童
A large number of farmers leave the countryside to search for work in the cities．Is it good or bad？We had a discussion at our school and here are the results．
Some think that farmers can help to make cities more beautiful and make our country stronger．Working in cities can make farmers richer．Others think that too many farmers go into the cities and they leave many left-behind children at home．Their parents care about them less and it's a serious problem to teach them．
I think that farmers leave the countryside to search for work in the cities is not a bad thing．But we shouldtake actionto help to deal with their problems about their family and their children's education．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Some students think that farmers can help make cities more beautiful and make our country stronger．
句中"that farmers can help make cities more beautiful and make our country stronger"为宾语从句．句中短语有："help do sth 帮助做某事"、"make sb/sth+形容词 使…怎么样"．这句话意为：一些学生认为农民可以帮助城市变得更漂亮，国家更富强．
高分句型二：
But we should take action to help deal with their problems about their family and their children's education．
句中使用短语有："take action to do sth 采取行动做某事"、"help do sth 帮助做某事"、"deal with 处理"．这句话意为：但是我们应该采取行动帮助他们解决家人问题和孩子的教育问题．

解答 A large number of farmers leave the countryside to search for work in the cities．Is it good or bad？We had a discussion at our school and here are the results．（开篇点题）
Some students think that farmers can help make cities more beautiful and make our country stronger．【高分句型一】Working in cities can make farmers richer．Others think that too many farmers go into the cities and they leave many left-behind children at home．Their parents care about them less and it's a serious problem to teach them．（讨论结果）
I think that farmers leave the countryside to search for work in the cities is not a bad thing．But we should take action to help deal with their problems about their family and their children's education．【高分句型二】（我的观点）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．