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同学们,暑假即将结束,你的暑假过得如何?做了哪些事情?感受如何?请以“My Summer Holiday”为题,写一篇80字左右的文章。

My Summer Holiday

How time flies! This summer holiday will be over soon and the new term will begin.

 

 

 

 

This is my summer holiday. Do you think it is very wonderful?

 

I had a good summer holiday this tear. In the morning I reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or magazines. In the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river. But the most enjoyable thing during this summer was to swim with my brother. We went swimming together on a hot sunny day in the nearest swimming pool. In the cool water we cooled down our bodies and played with water. I also went to see my grandma and grandpa during my summer holiday. They lived in the countryside happily. The countryside was very beautiful. I did many interesting things there.  What a happy and busy summer holiday I spent!

【解析】

试题分析:这篇短文要求我们就“My Summer Holiday” 写一篇短文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲,主要包括部分的内容。一是暑假过得如何;二是暑假做了哪些事情;三是感受如何。提纲虽然已经列好,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者讲述了自己如何度过暑假的,层次清晰表达到位。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I had a happy summer holiday this tear.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如In the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river. What a happy and busy summer holiday I spent!等。

考点:提纲类作文。

 

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