Question

19．你们班将以梦想为主题举办一次演讲会，请你以我的梦想为题写一篇演讲稿，演讲应包含以下几个方面的内容，并可以适当发挥，字数80-120词．
1．What's your dream？
2．How will you achieve your dream？
3．When your dream comes true，what will you do？
My dream is to be a doctor when I grow up．I want to help those sick people．
I know，to achieve my dream，I need study hard now．I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school．I'll study and do research on different diseases that bring great pains to the patients．After that，if I have a chance，I plan to open a hospital of my own．Then I can help as many as the poor people who have little money to see doctors．I wish everyone in the world can keep healthy and to alive longer．
I believe that I can realize my dream one day if only I insist on working hard and never give up．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈自己的梦想．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1梦想是什么？
2．怎么实现梦想？
3当你的梦想成真，你会做些什么？
常用到的重点短语：
grow up 长大
study hard 努力学习
keep healthy 保持健康
insist on 坚持
give up 放弃
【高分句型】
1．I know，to achieve my dream，I need study hard now．
to achieve my dream动词不定式做目的状语．
2．I believe①that I can realize my dream one day ②if only I ③insist on working hard and never④give up．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为believe的宾语．
②if only只要
③insist on 坚持
④give up 放弃

解答 My dream is to be a doctor when I grow up．I want to help those sick people．（梦想是什么）
I know，to achieve my dream，I need study hard now．【高分句型】I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school．I'll study and do research on different diseases that bring great pains to the patients．（怎么实现梦想）After that，if I have a chance，I plan to open a hospital of my own．Then I can help as many as the poor people who have little money to see doctors．I wish everyone in the world can keep healthy and to alive longer．（当你的梦想成真，你会做些什么）
I believe that I can realize my dream one day if only I insist on working hard and never give up．【高分句型】

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．本文介绍自己的梦想，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．