Question

4．下表是你和你最好朋友Tom的信息，请以"My best friend"为题写一篇文章介绍你的好朋友．
要求：
1．表格中所有信息必须使用，表中省略的信息自己可以补充拓展．
2．突出主题，详略得当．
3．不少于80个单词．

姓名	相同（似）之处	不同之处
Tom	1．个头一样高． 2．爱运动，每周锻炼两三次． 3．都很友好，乐于助人． 4．周末常去遗爱湖…	1．你朋友文静，而你… 2．你喜欢肥皂剧，而你朋友喜欢… 3．你朋友饮食习惯健康，而你… 4．你朋友比你刻苦．

Tom is my best friend．Let me tell you something between us．
　　We have some in common．Tom is as tall as me．We both like doing sports，and we will exercise together twice or three times a week．We are friendly to everyone．We think it's fun to help others
　　On weekends，we usually walk to Yi'ai Lake Park．The air there is the freshest in the city．We can enjoy our time quietly by taking a walk there．
　　However，we don't think it's necessary to be the same in everything．So there are also some differences between us．I'm funnier and more outgoing than Tom．He's quiet．I like soap operas．I think they are relaxing to watch．But Tom likes watching news．He has healthy eating habits but I don't．At school Tom is more hardworking than me，so he always gets higher grades．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  We think it's fun to help others我们认为帮助别人是有趣的．这是一个宾语从句，We think 是主句，后面的是宾语从句．
高分句型二
So there are also some differences between us所以我们之间也有一些不同之处．这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．

解答 My best friend
　　Tom is my best friend．Let me tell you something between us．
　　We have some in common．Tom is as tall as me．We both like doing sports，and we will exercise together twice or three times a week．We are friendly to everyone．We think it's fun to help others．【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】
　　On weekends，we usually walk to Yi'ai Lake Park．The air there is the freshest in the city．We can enjoy our time quietly by taking a walk there．【要点一，相同（似）之处】
　　However，we don't think it's necessary to be the same in everything．So there are also some differences between us【高分句型二，注意there be 句型的使用】．I'm funnier and more outgoing than Tom．He's quiet．I like soap operas．I think they are relaxing to watch．But Tom likes watching news．He has healthy eating habits but I don't．At school Tom is more hardworking than me，so he always gets higher grades．【要点二，不同之处】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．