Question

11．某英文报举办"家乡的变化"主题征文活动．请你根据下表提示，以"The Changes in My Hometown"为题，用英语写一篇80字左右的短文．

过 去	1．生活贫困，房屋破旧． 2．污染严重，垃圾遍地．
现 在	1．生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车． 2．环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝…
将 来	请你展望家乡的未来．

注意：1．文中不得出现具体的地名，否则扣分．
2．字数80字左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数．
3．要点完整，适当发挥，意思连贯．语句通顺．书写规范．
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past，my hometown was very small．                      

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
More and more people have bought their own computers，mobiles and even private cars!越来越多的人买了自己的电脑，手机甚至私家车．
比较级+and+比较级：越来越…
【高分句型二】
I will work hard ①to②make it more beautiful in the future将来我将会努力让我的家乡更美好．
①动词不定式做目的状语．
②make…+adj让…怎样．

解答 The Changes in My Hometown
In the past，my hometown was very small．People lived a poor life．The houses were old and small．（生活贫困，房屋破旧）Pollution was very serious，there was rubbish everywhere．（污染严重，垃圾遍地．）The traffic was not convenient，so few visitors came here．（交通不便，游人很少）Now great changes have taken place in my hometown．The environment has become more beautiful．The mountain have turned greener，the rivers clearer and the sky bluer．（环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝）There are trees，flowers and grass everywhere．People live a better life．Their houses are large and bright．More and more people have bought their own computers，mobiles and even private cars!【高分句型一】（生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车）Every year，thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city．（游客增多）I feel satisfied with life in my hometown．I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future．【高分句型二】（展望家乡的未来）

点评 做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．