Question

9．看图表达．假设这是你的房间，请写一段话．（至少五句话）

This is my room．There is a desk、a bed、achair and a table in it．The clock is on the table．There are some books on the desk．Some pictures and a kite are on the wall，the football is uhder the chair．I lovemy room very much．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There is a desk，a bed，a chair and a table in it．里面有一张桌子、床、一把椅子和一张桌子． 这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
Some pictures and a kite are on the wall．一些照片和一个风筝在墙上．on the wall在墙上．

解答 This is  my room．【开头点明主题】There is a desk，a bed，a chair and a table in it．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】The clock is on the table．There are some books on the desk．Some pictures and a kite are on the wall【高分句型二，注意介词词组的使用】，the football is uhder the chair．【正文部分详细介绍房间】I love  my room．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．