Question

18．In at least 60words，write a letter to your headmaster suggesting rules you think should be     changed or improved．Support your opinions with facts or examples．（给校长写一封至少60个词的信，向他建议几条需要改变或改进的学校规则，并辅以事实或例子．）
The following are for reference only．（（以下提示仅供参考））
Remember：Headmasters care about students'learning，safety and behavior．They are also concerned （在意） about costs．

Answer 1

分析 这篇短文要求我们以A letter to my headmaster为题写一篇作文，即给校长的一封信．在题目中给了我们这篇短文的重点内容．向他建议几条需要改变或改进的学校规则，并辅以事实或例子．写作时，需要注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅．希望学校改进的地方可以用将来时态或者是现在时态的适当句型来表达．
高分句型：
高分句型一：They are always afraid of hurting ourselves when we take exercise当我们锻炼时，他们总是害怕我们会伤害我们自己．be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事．
高分句型二：Why not wear our own clothes at times？为什么不穿我们自己的衣服 Why not…？加动词原形，表示提建议．

解答 A letter to my headmaster
Dear Mr．Headmaster，
How time flies！I'm going to leave this school．In this school I had a lot of great time．But my headmsters care about students'learning，safety and behaviour．I had enough time and place to take part in afer-school activities．They are always afraid of hurting ourselves when we take exercise（高分句型一）．（他们总是担心我们锻炼时会受伤．）Everyone should wear school uniform every day．Why not wear our own clothes at times？（高分句型二）I think we should have our hobbies．（这段主要介绍校长们担心学生的学习，安全和行为．）
Well，They are also concerned about costs．（他们也关心成本．）But I think sports are very important for us young students．We can learn to work together and make good friends．But I think our school needs to build a new sports area．It should have a soccer section，a basketball section，and a ping-pong section．I believe such facilities （设施）will meet our sporting needs．（这段主要向校长提些建议．）
Thank you for your reading this letter．
Yours faithfully，
Susan

点评 此题为应用文写作．首先要仔细审题，严格按照要求去写作．其次要注意信的格式，并注意与汉语信的不同；再次行文中要语句通顺，注意上下句的衔接，用英语式的思维去组织每个句子，避免受汉语的影响．采用不同的句式，尽量避免重复．注意不要出现单词，语法和时态等的错误．文中要多使用表示提建议的句型，比如例文中的why not…，you'd better，you should等．还有使用宾语从句和时间状语从句等，也可以让文章增色不少．