Question

7．近期各种选秀节目愈发火热，有些中学生也加入了选秀的行列．英语课上，Mr．Zhang让你们对这种现象进行讨论．请你根据下面的提示写一篇发言稿，并在课堂上发表演说．
内容包括：
1．有的人觉得选秀可以让人一夜成名，让人拥有不一样的经历，让人变得自信．
2．有的人则认为选秀纯粹是浪费时间，甚至还可能招致嘲笑．
3．你是怎么认为的呢？
作文要求：
1．语句连贯，80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
2．不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的姓名和校名．
Hi，everyone!I would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days．
Some students think the shows can make them famous．They think young people should do something different．If they have the chance to show their abilities to others，they can be more confident．They think it's very important for young people to show their abilities．Others think it's a waste of time and it's very hard for them to become successful．If they don't do well in the show，they will be laughed at．As a student，I think we should study hard and spend more time on our study．
Thanks for listening．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是针对选秀节目进行了一次讨论，要求写一篇发言稿，汇报讨论结果并发表自己的看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．有的人觉得选秀可以让人一夜成名，让人拥有不一样的经历，让人变得自信．
2．有的人则认为选秀纯粹是浪费时间，甚至还可能招致嘲笑．
3．你是怎么认为的呢？
常用到的重点短语：
make sb+adj 让某人怎么样
a waste of 浪费
do well in 擅长…
laugh at 嘲笑
study hard 努力学习
【高分句型】
1．They think ①②it's very important for young people to show their abilities．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
2．①If they don't ②do well in the show，they③will be laughed at．
①if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．
②do well in 擅长…
③一般将来时的被动语态 will+be+过去分词．laugh at 嘲笑

解答 Hi，everyone!I would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days．
Some students think the shows can make them famous．（有的人觉得选秀可以让人一夜成名）They think young people should do something different．If they have the chance to show their abilities to others，they can be more confident．They think it's very important for young people to show their abilities．．（让人拥有不一样的经历，让人变得自信）【高分句型】Others think it's a waste of time and it's very hard for them to become successful．（有的人则认为选秀纯粹是浪费时间）If they don't do well in the show，they will be laughed at．【高分句型】（甚至还可能招致嘲笑）As a student，I think we should study hard and spend more time on our study．（我的看法）
Thanks for listening．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．