Question

【题目】在“让梦想照进现实”的主题班会上，同学们畅谈了自己在初中的变化及种种经历。李浩也讲述了自己英语学习的经历。假如你是李浩，请根据以下要点，用英语写出李浩的发言稿。

要点如下：

1.以前性格内向，对英语没什么兴趣，上课很少举手发言。

2.英语考试常不及格，曾经很沮丧，想放弃英语。

3.同学们及时伸出援手，自己开始认真对待英语学习。

4.两年来，英语水平有较大的提高。

5.梦想将来去说英语的国家深造。

6.自己的一些感想。（一两点）

注意：

词数60—80，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：

1.frustrated adj.沮丧的 2.seldom adv. 很少，不常 3.put up 举起

Dear friends,

I’m very glad to talk about my English study here

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

I’m very glad to talk about my English study here. My name is Li Jie. I used to be an extremely shy and introverted girl and was not interested in English. I seldom raised my hand in class. As a result, I often failed in English exams. I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English. It's you, my classmates, who helped me in time. So I began to take English learning seriously.

Over the past two years, I think my English has improved a lot. I dreamed to study in an English-speaking country and I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country. I think my English will make great progress there.

Thank you.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，talk about，used to be，be interested in，as a result，at the party，give up，dream to do等。文中I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English./It's you, my classmates, who helped me in time./I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country./I think my English will make great progress there.等多种从句结构的综合运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。