Question

Writing 8(2012 广东)

A.信息归纳

    请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格。

BBC World Have Your Say “Life inChina”

      Every day,BBC News on TV,radio and online brings you stories from across the world...But what we want to hear are the stories that matter to you.

      Have you got a story about life inChinatoday? If you do,please put your story here.

      I like traveling and I have traveled a lot around China.During the trip,I often find that a number of Chinese don't have good public manners (举止) . They always talk loudly on the phone and smoke everywhere.The worst is that they often break the rules in public. For example,when I traveled in Hong Kong in January this year,I saw a kid eating noodles on the underground,which is against the rules.However,the kids mother didn’t think he did wrong. Can you believe it? Let5s improve our public manners.(Mike,Shenzhen)

     I am a 14-year-old boy from a poor village in Fuyting,Anhui Province. Like many other leftbehind children (留守儿童) in China,I live with my grandparents now. My father went to work in Shanghai several years ago. Last year,my mother went there to care for him because his health is not as good as before.They tell me to listen to my grandpar- ents and call me about twice a month to ask about my study.I really miss my parents and I hope I can afford to go to school in Shanghai. I think every child needs parents' love and care.(Wu Peigen,Anhui Province) 

                      Information Card

The topic of BBC   World Have  Your Say today	1.
The thing   that the kid did on the   underground	2.
The time when   Mike traveled in Hong Kong	3.
Wu Peigen’s   age	4.
People who   live with Wu Peigen now	5.

B.书面表达

    假设你是一名叫李明(Li Ming) 的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

    1.对其中的哪一个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？

    2.你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。

    3.就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。

    作文要求：

    1. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

    2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。

Dear Editor,

I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

Yours ,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

Writing 8

A. 信息归纳

[语篇解读]本文根据“Life in China”这个主题展开了讨论，文中主要讲了两个有代表性的小故事，发人深省。

1. Life in China. topic 主题，由文章的第一‘句 BBC World Have Your.Say: “ Life in China” 可知答案。

2. Eating noodles.由第—t*故事中的第五句中的“I saw a kid eating noodles on the underground” 可得出答案。

3. In January this year./This January.第一'个故事中的第五句中 “ when I traveled in Hong Kong in January this year” 直接给出了答案。

4. 14/Fourteen (years old) .由第二个故事中的第一句话“I am a 14-year-old boy from a poor... ” 可知答案。

5. His grandparents. 由第二个故事中的第二句中的“I live with my grandparents now” 可知答案。

B. 书面表达 [写作要点]

1. 本文是一封电子邮件，建议人称用第一人称，基本时态用一般 现在时。

2. 内容要点:要按照题目规定的内容一一写清楚。

3. 参考词汇:be interested in对 感兴趣;in fact事实上;in my o- pinion 在我看来;on the other hand 另一'方面。

[参考范文1]

Dear Editor,

   I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Mike^ story,because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou. I canH stand bad manners in public,either.In fact,I really get angry when people jump the queue and smoke in nonsmoking area. I think it’s wrong to break the rules in public. In my opinion,we should know more about good manners.On the other hand,we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can^ stop them,we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.

Yours,

Li Ming

[参考范文2]

Dear Editor,

     I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Wu Peigen’s story,because one of my friends is a leftbehind child too. He has been living with his grandparents since he was six. I can understand how hard life is for leftbehind children.I think it’s best for children to grow up under the care of their parents. In my opinion,we can join some social groups to offer help to leftbehind children. We can visit and make friends with them.On the other hand,they should be allowed to go to school in the city for free.

Yours, 

Li Mins