Question

4．短文改错（10分）下列短文的划线部分是错误的，请将其正确答案书写于答题卡卷II各小题规定的位置．
Confucius was born in the state ofLu in the year of 551 B．C．When he is（91）was
3 years old，his father died．And when he was 17，his mother died．And（92）But
Confucius received a good  education when he was young．In his thirty，（93）thirties
Confucius  began to teach..He spent the rest of his life teaching．In （94）At
the age of 55，Confucius begins（95）began
to travel around China．He tried to search for good rule（96）rules
of behavior．When Confucius was 68 years old，he returned back（97）returned
to Lu，his home state．He wrote lots of books after hecame back..Five years after，（98）later
he passed away．Although he has been died（99）dead
for several thousand years，we can still remember he（100）him
forever．

Answer 1

分析 文章介绍了孔子．提到了他的出生年份，他的家庭，他的教育经历，他的工作生涯以及他的成就．

解答 91．was 考查时态．由was，died这些过去式可知此文的时态是一般过去时，要将is改为过去式was．
92．But 考查连词．分析语境可知Confucius received a good  education when he was young与And when he was 17，his mother died间是转折关系，要用but连接．
93．thirties 考查固定搭配．in one's+整十的数的复数形式表示在某人几十几岁时，此处表示在他三十多岁时，用thirty的复数形式．
94．At 考查固定搭配．at the age of…表示在…岁时，此处将In改为At．
95．began 考查时态．由at the age of 55可知时态 是一般过去时，谓语动词要用过去式，要填begin的过去式began，将begins改为began．
96．rules 考查名词的数．rule是可数名词，此处没有表示单数意义的词语修饰，所以要用rule的复数形式．
97．returned 考查固定搭配．return to+地方表示回到某地，此处表示他回到了鲁，删去back．
98．later 考查副词．此处表示五年后，after用在时间前，可用after five years表示，但此处是在时间后，要用later表示之后．
99．dead 考查形容词．die是非延续性动词，此处表示的是虽然他已经死了几千年了，表示的是死亡的状态，要用形容词dead．
100．him 考查代词．remember是动词，后面的代词要用宾格形式，he的宾格形式是him．

点评 改错题的常考点有动词的时态，主谓一致，名词的单复数，连词与语境的关系，以及形容词与副词的正确使用，做题时要认真分析，做完题要仔细检查．