Question

【题目】书面表达

学校将举办英语角活动，让同学们互相交流学习英语的感受与方法。假如你是李明, 为了在这次活动中更好地分享你学习英语的好方法，请你根据下列要求，为这次交流活动准备一份80词左右的讲稿，开头已给出。

写作要求：

1. 简单自我介绍；

2. 谈谈自己学习英语的感受；

3. 给出学习英语的几点建议；、

Hello, everyone._______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming, I'm from Class 2, Grade 8. My favorite subject is English because it's very useful and important for us. Now I will give you some advice about how to improve your English. You should watch some English films and listen to some English songs to learn new words and improve your pronunciation. It’s a good idea to speak English loudly to your classmates as much as possible. If you want to improve your reading skills, why not read some newspaper and books in English? How about writing some new words and expressions on the notebooks, and place them in your room. Try to remember them every day. You should practise listening, speaking, reading and writing as much as possible every day. And you will improve your English in these ways.

Thanks a lot.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。要求写一篇有关英语学习的演讲稿。根据提示要求，短文要从自我介绍、学习英语的感受、学习英语的建议三个方面进行写作。重点是对英语学习的建议，要详细介绍。英语学习是一个听、说、读、写全面提高的过程，可以从这四个方面作一些建议。短文用一般现在时态，用第一人称形式。

写作亮点：本范文开头用了一句话介绍自己，用了一句话讲述自己的学习感受，其余的篇幅都用于介绍对英语学习的建议，层次清楚，中心明确，重点突出。其中用的should, why not, how about等等结构，使提建议的方式多样化，具体生动。文中大量用到的动词短语，不定式短语，复合句，都为本文增色不少。