Question

17．I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School
提示：初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈．在老师、同学和家长的帮助下，通过你的努力，你在学习、生活、文体活动、与人相处等方面，一定学到很多，取得了进步．请你根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文．
要求：
1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2）文中不得使用其真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3）请将短文写在答题卡上．写在本试题卷上无效．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Fortunately，my friends showed me that education is important for my future，and I began to work harder at school．
这句话的句意为：幸运的是，我的朋友向我证明了教育对我的将来很重要，然后我开始在学校更努力地学习了．"education is important for my future"为宾语从句，做"show"的宾语．
高分句型二：
I used to be a bit shy，but my friends and teachers have helped me to be more confident．
这句话句意为：我过去经常害羞，但是我的朋友帮助我变得更加自信．其中"used　to　do　sth"意为"过去常常做某事"，"help　sb　（to）　do　sth"意为"帮助某人做某事"．

解答 I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School
My time at junior high school has been mostly good．（开篇点题）I've been at junior high school since 2004．In the first year，I made some good friends，and had a lot of fun．However，I didn't do so well at school in Grades 6 and 7．I didn't study hard enough．Fortunately，my friends showed me that education is important for my future，and I began to work harder at school．【高分句型一】I used to be a bit shy，but my friends and teachers have helped me to be more confident．【高分句型二】Now I know that I have the ability to do good work．My reports in Grade 8 were much better than in Grades 6 and 7．I'm very happy that I'm no longer bottom of the class．Since Grade 8，I think I have become more confident．I have learned a lot at junior high school．（成长经历）
I have worked hard and I have enjoyed these last four years．I hope to do well in the final exam．I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me．（总结全文）

点评 此作文要求考生根据初中三年的生活写一篇记叙文．题目为：I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School．因为是写自己的收获，所以人称用第一人称．根据自己的生活经历，找出自己在学习、生活、文体活动、与人相处等方面的进步，写出本文．